Intervention of the Heart - Comments

  • Ovie8

    Ovie8 (100)

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    I just read through your story, and I enjoyed it. I liked how long it was, and the characters were easy to relate to, which was a very good element. The grammar was fairly good, and I appreciated the amount of dialogue involved. Anyway, thanks so much for the entry, and I'll keep you updated on the standings! :)
    June 2nd, 2014 at 07:56am