Dangerous - Comments

I love this story, oh my god!!

I really like stories like this, I love trying to figure out what's going to happen and what the bad guy wants. I blame all the crime shows I watch

So, obviously Victor is holding Matt's sister captive so he has complete control over Matt, and threatening to kill her and the others will make sure Matt does whatever is asked of him. Pretty smart. XD

Can't wait to find out what it is that Matt actually does for Victor and why he wants Pheonix so bad. I'm thinking Matt is going to go against Victor, too, which will mean a whole load of shit for him and his family.

So excited to read more!

Kinda curious as to what Victor wants. Only the second chapter and I already ridiculously attatched to Shiloh. And what Matt did was really sweet, made me wanna hug him. Update soon!

God damn I love Matt. That was so sweet of him. I'm anxious to know what this Victor fuck wants from Phoenix, and why. And I hope he doesn't end up hurting Shiloh, it'll make me wanna become fictional and kick his ass. Please update this soon!

Want more! I love Matt's POV. :)

I'm loving this already! Can't wait for the next chapter.

This was an intriguing first chapter, and I'm curious as to what is to come of this story and as to what exactly is going on. So far I love Phoenix and her relationship with Shiloh. I wonder what the deal with Matt and Brian are and who this 'bastard' is and exactly what he's going to do to the two girls. I love the background, as fucked up as that sounds, and storyline so far and can't wait for the next update, so please update soon!

This is amazing so far. I like how kick ass Phoenix sounds. She seems like a strong woman who has gone through a lot. Not only taking care of her father but also her little sister must be a tough job for her at that age. In the first chapter a lot was introduced that made me want to read more. I can't wait to read what happens, but I feel like a lot of action is going to be involve. The banner and the whole layout gives it a dangerous vibe just like the title which captivated me instantly. That's why I clicked on it to see what this story was about. Great job so far. You are a great writer and the way you use descriptive words so we can understand it in a more vivid way is amazing. Please update soon, because this is going to become one of my favorite stories.

xoxo, Christie aka Rp :)

Interesting first chapter for sure. I'm intrigued to read more. I always like stories when Matt and Brian are scoping out people lol.

Update soon!