Katia Behan - Comments

You have no idea how many chills ran down my spine when I read this. It was so upsetting and just sad, I guess I can say. Without really getting into the guy, I can just tell that he's a bad guy, and that she doesn't need to be with him. Or maybe he could just be a good guy and she's just having bad nightmares about him. But I don't think that's it.

I absolutely love this, you have no idea. In a small amount of words, you have left me breathless. So much emotion was put into this. Sadness, anger, fear. It's just so chilling, and I love it so much. I also want to comment on the chapter title: why bother? Now this makes me sad. If the guy is the monster that I read about, it's just sad that she thinks she can't leave. Like what's the point, you know? And that's what makes me sad.

This was wonderful. I loved it.

Oooo, this is great.

I adore that last sentence. I feel like it can be taken as either her just saying good night, or as her going to kill him or something. Which is how I saw it BECAUSE THAT'S JUST WHAT HAPPENS WHEN I READ SENTENCES LIKE THAT.

Really though, your writing is so lovely, darling. I really enjoyed that the dream seemed to kind of be a reflection of what was going on in Katia's life, and the way you write it was really fantastic. It was creepy but in a way that made me think, which I always enjoy in a story.

Fantastic job love!