Hey there! I'm here for the gift swap (: So, I definitely liked the title of the story, and it's eye catching. But what made me actually read this was the summary. Man, it was just too good! Especially the last line - "He would break her heart, and she would allow it." Superb. There isn't really much to say since there are only two chapters and nothing notable has happened yet. But, I do commend you on your description and the way it projects an image in my mind. It's beautifully done. Plus, I want to see who Scott is, and if he is the person mentioned in the summary. Also, wanna see what disturbs Kate, what's so irritating about him haha. I like Kate for now (especially because she likes rap music haha). I'm subscribing to this and will keep reading as you post, and let you know how you're going. The plot is interesting and I hope you'll update soon. Will be awaiting it! (:
On a sidenote, your layout is adorable <3
January 6th, 2015 at 03:19pm
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So, I definitely liked the title of the story, and it's eye catching. But what made me actually read this was the summary. Man, it was just too good! Especially the last line - "He would break her heart, and she would allow it." Superb.
There isn't really much to say since there are only two chapters and nothing notable has happened yet. But, I do commend you on your description and the way it projects an image in my mind. It's beautifully done. Plus, I want to see who Scott is, and if he is the person mentioned in the summary. Also, wanna see what disturbs Kate, what's so irritating about him haha. I like Kate for now (especially because she likes rap music haha). I'm subscribing to this and will keep reading as you post, and let you know how you're going.
The plot is interesting and I hope you'll update soon. Will be awaiting it! (:
On a sidenote, your layout is adorable <3