Manwhore - Comments

  • Jordypye

    Jordypye (1400)

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    I really like where this is going, you have an interesting plot so far and I like the characters. I especially like Lexi so far Cute

    My word of advice is to make the lines spaced out a bit more because they're just touching and it's a bit tedious to read it like that.

    Otherwise this is great and I can't wait to read more!
    June 15th, 2014 at 05:22am