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Author [chaosofthedead]
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I really like where this is going, you have an interesting plot so far and I like the characters. I especially like Lexi so far
My word of advice is to make the lines spaced out a bit more because they're just touching and it's a bit tedious to read it like that.
Otherwise this is great and I can't wait to read more!
June 15th, 2014 at 05:22am
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My word of advice is to make the lines spaced out a bit more because they're just touching and it's a bit tedious to read it like that.
Otherwise this is great and I can't wait to read more!