Just Hold Me - Comments

  • saegusa.

    saegusa. (105)

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    This is sososo cute, man, I'm so glad this is here.

    THE FIRST LINE HAS ME BURSTING INTO LAUGHTER. DAMMIT TAYLOR.

    Her apartment souns so perfectly wonderful and cozy and nice, I wanna spend time in it and just be all warm and happy and wonderful and she even has the fan made items and such on the walls. Cute.

    THOSE DAMNED INFOMERCIALS, MAN, THEY KILL ME. I can be up at like, two, and I need television to distract me and help me out and nope, just buy this fruit blender peeler thing, I don't even know. It doesn't exactly help me out, that's for sure. "Because everyone is really interested in buying a high tech blender at this hour." It's you and me, Jeremy. You and me.

    The whole paragraph that describes Hayley and Oli is absolutely perfect, I love it, it's absolutely wonderful and it's so incredibly Hayliver that it hurts. In Love

    DAMMIT OLI HE FREAKING HE-HE MISSED THE THE BIRTHDAY. But he cleaned up and it's all good and I love those two lines because he's in it for the long run and that perfectly shows it.

    "Taylor and Jeremy were on opposite ends of the couch, fast asleep and having a snoring competition." I can't even express how great that is, like, seriously.

    HE HATH ARRIVED. "Too fucking long, as expected when I need to see Hayley." HE NEEDS TO SEE HAYLEY OH MY GOSH AGH THE PERFECT IN SUCH A SHORT AND SIMPLE LINE AND THEN WE GET THE QUICK TAYLOR AND HAYLEY FRIENDY-FRIEND CUTENESS I AM IN LOVE.

    "Plus, she wasn't an angry drunk, which was a godsend."I love Oli. Did you know that I love Oli? Because I love Oli. And I love Hayley. And I love just everyone, okay. I love them all. I love this story. I love so much.

    Hayley's so cute oh my gosh and stage five spider monkey clinger girlfriend and she's awake now, aha, and it's so great aND JUST TAKE IT ALL OFF WOWEE but it's still so great and she's great and adorable and, "I'm not even drunk, I swear. Just a little lightheaded and really happy to see you." The perfection.

    Then she gets all self-conscious and sad and Oli's like nope not today princess because just wait until you're sobered, you're gonna wanna lock me away. But he manages to do it in the absolute cutest way and your money back and gaaaah.

    The final two paragraphs. Oh my goodness. This is absolute beautiful perfection and it's so cute and lovely and I love it and he's so positive now because of Hayley and this is beautiful and things are bright now and it's. so. damned. perfect.

    THIS IS FABULOUS. I love this, I love you, I love this, I just. In Love Arms In Love
    June 17th, 2014 at 03:37pm
  • bullets are hailing.

    bullets are hailing. (250)

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    THIS WAS LIKE THE BEST THING TO COME OUT THE SHOWER TO.
    No, seriously, right when I got out the shower I checked Mibba and saw this.

    BUT ANYWAYS, THIS FLUFF IS PERFECT AND DID THINGS TO MY HEART. YOU PRETTY MUCH PUT EVERYTHING I LOVE ABOUT HAYLIVER IN THIS.

    Ah, Hayley being drunk. Yeah, I totally see her being the cute and adorable funny drunk. And yay for Taylor and Jeremy being the lovely bandmates they are and taking care of her until Oli came. Omg but the infomercials part made me laugh a little because I can relate because I always question why the hell they play them so late like who would buy that shit. XD

    The “he” in question was Hayley’s boyfriend, Oliver Sykes. Oliver, or Oli, was well known as the front man of Bring Me the Horizon and together, the duo formed one of the music scene’s most popular but highly controversial power couples. They were viewed as popular within the scene because of the fact that they appeared to personify the concept of “opposites attract.” Hayley was the image of refined beauty and elegance with an edge, while Oli was modified from head to toe and always ready to party and have a good time. Based on the differing genres of their respective bands, many people thought it was either a great match or an awful one. The positive and negative comments didn’t deter them though, as the couple had been together for five years and counting.

    Favorite. Paragraph. You always describe Hayliver so perfectly and like can you teach me how to do that because I loved this so much. I love it when them being opposites is brought up and you never disappoint when it comes to that. These two and their love just AWWWW. In Love

    Then Oli comes and I feel you Oli. Plane rides takes forever and he just wants to be with his boo thang so flights needa hurry their asses up. File

    But that little Taylor/Hayley friendship moment tho. Another favorite thing I love in Hayliver. So cute and beautiful I cannot.

    Oli, you sweetheart. That's so fucking adorable because he's happy to be with her again since it's been a long time, but as much as he wants her to be awake so they can kiss and spend time together, he wants her to rest first and is about to carry her to the bed. Help me, the cute is throwing me against the wall.

    But Hayley's all nope I don't wanna sleep I wanna hold you. And he agrees BECAUSE WHO DOESN'T LOVE CUDDLING. CUDDLE THROUGH THE WHOLE NIGHT I DON'T CARE I AM SCREAMING FROM ALL THIS CUTENESS.

    By the way, I don't know why you needed my help in witty banter because you're way better at it than I am and this one-shot right here proves it. You can't deny it anymore because the evidence is right here. Coffee

    He was going to focus on the positive and banish the negative thoughts as they popped into his mind.

    I see he's living by that tattoo of hers. ~~ More beautiful. I can't handle all this beautiful.

    The ending is beautiful and I'm filling up with happiness and it's making me fly into the air because ugh, these two needed some happy and my heart is fluttering so much because Oli didn't really enjoy things until Hayley came along because she's so bright and positive and brought him to life and made things better because she's a gorgeous beautiful angel. In Love In Love In Love

    I see Alex did his job and motivated you. tehe

    This was amazing and like I said, you never disappoint and your Hayliver Momma is very proud. I loved this and I love you. Arms
    June 16th, 2014 at 09:53pm