Rarae Aves - Comments

mai942:

I love punk rock kinda dude even though I have no idea if this character really exist. Hehehe. Is he exist?

No, he isn't a real person. I made him up. Devon, Tia, Mason, Max, Jeff, all of the teachers, her bosses, Delia, etc. are all made up characters. The only real people are Hana and Amber. They are K-pop idols in real life, but the story is completely made up. Oh, and the dogs (Jack-Jack and Princess) are named after the dogs Amber has in real life.

If you wanna see what Hana and Amber look like in real life just click on my story where is says "characters" at the top or click on their names in the description.

I love punk rock kinda dude eventhough I have no idea if this character really exist. Hehehe. Is he exist?

@ taste my dream

THANK YOU SO MUCH! I thought you'd like Devon, too cuz he's a punk rocker type dude lolol.

I really liked this chapter if only because we get to see who Amber hangs out with and get a introduction of their personalities. Their interaction felt natural and I can totally see this being a real life group of friends.

I could relate to Amber's monologue about not having enough money and Mason being kind of a brat. I sometimes have (and have had) feelings like that toward my friends, ha ha.

I don't know If I can order them but I'd put Jeff and Tia as probably the ones I have good feelings for so far, if only because they both remind me of me. (Jeff and his comics, Tia being quiet).

Overall, I look forward to the rest of the story!

Finally, I had time to read this........ Good job, keep it up!

@ Cosmic Gerbil

In real life, Amber has dogs named Jack-Jack and Gongju (Princess), so I put them in the story lol. Yeah, the bus driver sucks.

Ah, now we are at the beginning :) The puppies sound so sweet but the bus driver sounds horrid xD

@ mai942

Yay! THank you so much.

@ SecretPiggyMafia
No probs, it's a really good story :)

Hey,, you wrote it beautifully. So good I felt so jealous because I can't write as beautiful as you did. :(
Btw, keep it up honey. I am waiting for the updates

@ Cosmic Gerbil

Yay! Thank you for the comment. I appreciate it.

I like it :) I always enjoy stories when kids run away from evil parents/step-parents >:) The fairy castle sounds beautiful but I wouldn't want to be locked up there either. Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)