I once read a Frerard story involving the same song. it made me cry. this one didn't though. not like it's nesessarily a bad thing that it didn't move me like that. it was just too quick and I didn't feel like crying tonight anyway. the plot is cute and pretty much stick to the song. that's great. an advice. use the word 'it' a bit more. in the beginning there are some places where you could have used it or them nothing you have to change but just remember it in the future.
the plot is cute and pretty much stick to the song. that's great.
an advice. use the word 'it' a bit more. in the beginning there are some places where you could have used it or them nothing you have to change but just remember it in the future.