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  • cola frank.

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    I like how you described the scene after Mr. Dale was killed. It's really disturbing and it made me feel so bad for him. Sad

    Also, dang, Frank's mom has got some sort of stick up her but Shifty
    July 4th, 2014 at 09:53pm
  • Bringmethe_kellic_

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    I'm Lovely!!!! Thanks!!!! I think you called me lovely or was it amazing? I tea too many stories and I times I forget what the story is about but it's not that it's bad it's just me, andddd great I'm rambling *sigh*.

    Tbh I think I don't like franks mom, she makes me wanna choke her but she brought life to wonderful Frankie......
    July 4th, 2014 at 04:34am
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    @ Bringmethe_kellic_
    Dat MattG reference

    And yeah. Gerard is going to be a major douche in this.
    July 2nd, 2014 at 06:57am
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    Douche Canoe, Frank is so sweet in this I can't imagine Gerard as a asshole
    July 1st, 2014 at 11:49pm
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    @ cola frank.
    Thanks! And for this fic, nahhh, You won't need to know a lot. But basically a fertile is a submissive [who, despite being a male or female] can have babies and a dominator is, well, a dominate. They're the aggressive ones.

    I hope this helped, with the whole dom/fertile scene of the story? Arms
    July 1st, 2014 at 07:46am
  • cola frank.

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    Okay, so I'm not really a hardcore MCR fan. I mean. I like their music, but I don't know anything about that fandom so I don't know if that's a bad thing to be in the dark about since I'm reading this. I've never read anything involving fertile/dominator stuff.

    But it's really interesting. tehe I really like your description and especially your dialogue!
    July 1st, 2014 at 06:46am
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    @ Bringmethe_kellic_
    Half of the next chapter is already written, so hopefully I'll get it finished and post it today❤
    June 30th, 2014 at 03:52pm
  • Bringmethe_kellic_

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    It's really great, keep going I have so many questions. Can't wait till the next update <3
    June 30th, 2014 at 03:09pm
  • blackparadebullet

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    HECK FREAKING YES!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
    June 29th, 2014 at 05:51pm
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    I'm intrigued, the short description sounded pretty good and the prologue had me asking questions. I like that. Looking forward to the next update
    June 26th, 2014 at 12:12pm
  • cola frank.

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    This is such a great prologue. Like, the entire time I'm just asking, "who is this person? Who is baby?" Then you reveal it's Anthony, but we still don't know who it is and it just makes me want to read further. So bad.

    Can't wait for your next update.
    June 26th, 2014 at 09:07am
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    @ JeremyTheThirteenth
    Woo, thanks ❤ & I didn't know that about Supernatural. Oops. cx
    June 26th, 2014 at 08:47am
  • JeremyTheThirteenth

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    This is a nice, short prologue. Very mysterious and leaves a lot of questions. I thought it was a Supernatural fanfic at first cause of the Sam and Adam, haha. The layout is cool, I've never seen a gif in one before. And the last sentence spoken "my baby Anthony is gone." really leaves you curious because Frank's middle name is Anthony. This is good! I shall subscribe.
    June 26th, 2014 at 08:37am