July 24th, 2014 at 01:30am
The layout is so simple but pretty, which I love. I'm not a fan of layouts that have too much going on in them.
I actually own this album, so I'm excited to see how the album feels with the story. I'm actually going to put the album on while I read, and see how I feel because of it.
Getting to the chapter, I love the start to the story. It's gripping enough to make me want to read on. The idea of light vs dark has always been one that interest me in stories.
I love that the story is like a delve into the senses of Dustin, it really gives the story a natural feel and enables me to understand more about Dustin's character.
I must say this entire story is so intriguing, very Fight Club-y in a way if you understand what I mean. Fight Club is one of my all time favourite movies, so that's a big compliment anyway. I think there's more coming from the unanswered question that ends the chapter and the authors note. I must say that I can't way to read more, and see just how well it compliments the album.
I really like, in the voices section, how he explained The Draw in such detail. It's really cool that it waas mentioned in the beginning of the novel so the reader would have some idea of what the kids do in their spare time. But even though it was talked about, I feel like there is so much more informatioin about it that we don't know about it.
What I like about the chapter as well, and I like a lot of things in this story so far, is how much, like I said before, information was left out. Like what exactly happened to him. Where are his friends? Why are there people asking him questions? I mean, I feel like he was caught by the government or something, but I can't be sure because it doesn't really say. If it does, though, then I just don't remember.
Anyway anyway, before I continue going on and on, I want to say that I really enjoy this story so far even though it's just one chapter. I don't have anything bad to say about it or anything that confused me about it so far, which is why I haven't mentioned any advice to change anything. I think it's amazing!