How did he not realize that was Michelle?? Was it that dark??? Weird
August 9th, 2016 at 01:43pm
This was something different since we are used to read stories where the female characters are the ones that have that sort of characterization. I liked how you put Matt as the escort instead of a female or in this case Michelle. It was good and I liked that fact. I enjoyed reading it but it was a bit confusing because of the constant change of POVs. It wasn't bad though but I was a bit lost at first until I got the hanged of it. hehe.
I wished I could have read a little more details to the actual sex scene but it was still hot and exciting. I liked the whole concept of it. One thing that I noticed and loved was that he had to wear a mask because it made him more mysterious. You did a good job writing this. You managed to use the necessary details in order to let the reader understand what Michelle was going through even though there wasn't a direct dialogue between her and her husband which was good.
Awesome one shot!
xoxo, RP