I'm not yet sure how I feel about Patrick. I definitely get an uneasy feeling about him and I'm kind of wondering why he and his ex-wife are exes. I am curious about the neighbor girl, though, and how she'll play in to all this. All in all, I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of this story!
Wow, this is great, it is written beautifully and paints a picture in the readers head. Even though this is a short chapter it sets the novel up well and I just know this is going to be good. Very excited for the next update :)
Wow, this is great, it is written beautifully and paints a picture in the readers head. Even though this is a short chapter it sets the novel up well and I just know this is going to be good. Very excited for the next update :)