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@ chaosofthedead
Oh! I'm so glad it did! :)

@ XSoulXLoverX
This comment made my day, lol. Thank you so much! :)

Your author's note is soooo wrong, this is not even a little shitty.

This is one of my favorite Lana songs, and favorite songs in general, and the way you interpreted it was amazing. You oh so cleverly incorporated the key points of the song into this piece and I loved it. I enjoyed that it was both playful and serious. I thought that you did a really excellent job. I wasn't expecting the abuse part, but having that in there was actually a really nice touch. It added drama and made the plot that much more interesting. You made it flow so beautifully and I enjoyed that a lot about the piece. I think you just blew me away with this. I loved the ending of the piece I thought it tied it together really nicely. You managed to create something really spectacular with this.

@ Theo Rossi;
Thank you, that really means a lot. :)

I have to say that the twist in the story was interesting to say the least. I have never heard the song this is based off of before, but I do see how it fits with the story.

I like how you started off, making it seem like it's going to be really sweet. Then you put in that twist about what happens when he gets drunk. I have to say that I really like the last paragraph because you brought it full circle. Is that the right term I'm looking for?

Anyways, I think this is really well-written and the layout is beautiful.