Takes My Breath Away - Comments

  • Katie Mosing

    Katie Mosing (33815)

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    I love the beginning of this right away. It makes me want to know what is on his mind and what has him so fidgety. I can tell something interesting is going on and I instantly want to read more.

    I could tell even when they were at lunch that there was something going on between them and I love the way that this progressed slowly into them becoming boyfriends, which was so sweet and adorable.

    This was an amazing one shot and I really enjoyed reading it!
    August 5th, 2014 at 02:39am