Blown - Comments

i really find myself attracted to the realism of all this, especially in a sense where the summary lets the reader know "we're all headed for destruction". i feel like we're all touched w/ this sort of thing from time to time in our lives - which in short can be unpredictable & very impulsive. so the shortness of your summary is already a hook that decided to drag me

the first chapter is also just as short & simple, not description-heavy or over-detailed. simple in the sense that jake is basically running rampant on drugs & none of the accused characters that've been named can honestly give a shit, but deep down know that he's basically just a psycho.

it's not always that i read something like this w/ realism dripping from every word, but i love this w/ everything in me. wonderful job!

I like how short this is. It's more powerful, in a way. I do like how well you capture all those emotions in a short of amount of words. I'm intrigued by your characters and what you have stored for your plot!!

I adore this. This is magical. I can't wait to read more!

Yes.

YES

I love it. Please update.