I'm Just a Puppet and She's Holding the Strings - Comments

This was such a great story!! I really enjoyed it. I thought the fake relationship between Pierre and Rachel was really well written, and as I got close to the end I was getting so antsy!! The build-up was really effective to the end. I like, actually don't really have comments because they've either been said and I really liked it :)

This is adorable.

Ahhh, okay. So I was going through random profiles and I came across yours, when I noticed you had a Sebastien story. So of course, being in love with Simple Plan, I was like, awesome! So, I started reading it yesterday and I have to say it was such a good story.

I loved in the beginning how when they were seventeen, she was always hurting him, it was hilarious. And I love the irony or whatever it's called of them losing contact with each other because of a miscommunication, but them meeting up years after, and he's all getting married and what not, and she ends up helping him with his relationship. Genious. And it's awesome how it wasn't one those cliche mushy stories.

Haha. You know when her and Mia were talking about no one they knew who would go to the Golden Eagle, I automatically thought, "Hey, wouldn't it be such a coincidence if Seb ended up going there for his bachelor's party and he sees Rachel?" And then, BAM! That's exactly what happened! Haha. I was like, "Yay! I was right! I was right! Boo yeah, I was right!"

Lol. Anyway, I totally enjoyed reading this story. Oh, and I almost forgot. I thought the way you made like those nostalgic moments happen before they remembered each other, were totally cool. And you know those heart felt touchy moments between Seb and Rachel? Yeah, those gave me butterflies. You could totally feel the chemistry between them, and how their heart ached because they couldn't be together. So sad. Anyway, like I said before, genious my dear. Just genious (:

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this one!!! (Well... all of them! hehe)

This was soooo unexpected!

You are GRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!

Congrats!