Mirror Mirror - Comments

This was really deceptively good, because the language style is very simple, almost anticlimactic, but the concept is so well conceived and fully realized that it makes your skin crawl.

I literally had a chill run up my spine. Keep up the good work, this is great.

Whoa, whoa, so many whoa's! I love the simplicity, but even with that simplicity you've managed to make my skin kind of crawl. Now I'm really paranoid to look into the mirror, I have brown eyes. I've always thought of mirrors as nothing too significant, but it's surely going to change now that I've read this. So many kudos to you!

Really though, your presentation and details are flawless and I can see great things coming from you in the future--if you decide to write again on here

Also, I love the layout! Didn't hurt my eyes, and the font was a nice size too. What gave you the inspiration to write this?

I've always thought that there was more to mirrors than just reflection too. I've always thought there was another world behind it full of pain and suffering. Things that we don't see when we see our reflections is somehow transported or seeing in the other part of the glass. This is a great story because it gives a little insight of a possibility. IT felt very real which makes it that much more scary.

Your details were very well written and described. Your writing style is great and the plot was a mystery. Great story which I liked very much.