Lady Cobra - Comments

DAYUM.

I really wasn't sure if I liked Lady Cobra at the start - she seemed quite superficial but the first trip to the basement really changed that for me. I love a good nerd-romance That bonding scene was really beautiful.

But that ending. WOW. So, so clever and it made everything so clear and I had to laugh. I'm kind of annoyed this was just a one-shot, but at the same time, my imagination can do wonders thinking about the games those two would conjure against each other

Argh, why is this only a one shot ;;_;;

The chemistry was so good in this it's unbelievable, you never cease to write Oberyn perfectly. Every line he had was excellent and something that he would really say!

Lady Cobra was also goddamn awesome.

I can't believe she betrayed him

Why is this only a one shot? It's too good to only be a one-shot :(

Hello there!! I just found this gem and I just had to leave a comment.

First off, I absolutely love the layout. It's so BEAUTIFUL. From the simple sand color and the snake-skin mosaic content background and the banner...it is perfect.

And onto the piece...this is actually my very first Oberyn fan-fiction that I have come across. In fact, this was my very first Game of Thrones fan fiction at that. And boy, you did not disappoint! Seriously, it felt as if I was actually watching an episode. I could easily picture this as a great scene. And Lady Cobra just matched the intensity and sensuality that Oberyn is known for.
What I loved with this piece is that you seemed to know Oberyn and his personality/ways so well that you didn't stray a bit as you wrote this. Many times in fan-fictions, writers unintentionally stray from character, and it kind of throws off the readers that love the character. But this was no problem here; everything he said and did here is what I can easily picture the Red Viper doing. He was so cunning and intelligent, sensual and intense, and even wrathful at the very end. It was perfectly done. Even when Lady Cobra and Oberyn was---for the lack of better terms, 'geeking out' over their passion for their poisons, it was still true to character. I could feel his intelligence and the curious intrigue he seemed to always have.

Oberyn was one of my favorite characters in Season 4, so I'm glad that I found this fanfic. You certainly did more than do him justice. I don't say this to many writers---but honestly, thank you for writing this!! I literally couldn't make myself stop reading!

Any additional note...I found no spelling or grammar errors, which is another huge bonus for me!

My, my...it seems that I have practically written you a book!! it was that good!! But ehem...I don't want to take up any more of your time.

Thank you for sharing, and great job with this piece!! Here, you have my recommendation!