Without You - Comments

I'm here judging the drabble section of my pre-writes contest!

I absolutely adore the idea of something that holds so many god memories for the woman mentioned is suddenly turned into something that isn't as desirable. The fact that you build up this wonderful relationship between the two characters, just to tear it down and use the introduction (in a way) to do so is really clever and works really well to make this even more emotional and hard-hitting.

Honestly, I don't think I'd be able to keep quiet about something like that so I couldn't connect to the ending myself, but I know plenty of people who would go back for fear of losing someone. Who knows, maybe it's something that'll change about me when I grow older and it did genuinely make me think about what I'd do in that situation. That personal aspect to the story was a really interesting and thought-provoking part of this piece. Awesome job!

I love how ambiguous this story was and how it wasn't just up front and in your face. You really had to read between the lines to get the full details of the story, and it left a lot to the imagination, which I like. It was a quick and emotional read that really left me thinking about the meaning of the story and the characters. I love hoe it detailed the woman and her experiences so secretly. This was an amazing story and I really enjoyed reading it! Wonderful job!

I love how ambiguous this story was and how it wasn't just up front and in your face. You really had to read between the lines to get the full details of the story, and it left a lot to the imagination, which I like. It was a quick and emotional read that really left me thinking about the meaning of the story and the characters. I love hoe it detailed the woman and her experiences so secretly. This was an amazing story and I really enjoyed reading it! Wonderful job!