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  • OverbearingStruggles

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    This was so good!! It hurt and I was worried.
    “It was just a bullshit thing to pull with me. You can’t say that shit to me, Alex, you can’t. It like, breaks the fucking rules or some other shit." Ugh, sassy, honest Jack killing me!
    Hot hottness, too. Seriously, everything. So good.
    September 28th, 2015 at 08:36am
  • emilygrace0516

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    this was equal parts hot as shit and fucking adorable and its probably along the lines of the best thing i ever read. i am also a sucker for the whole accidentally falling into unrequited love with your best friend cause thats basically my life right now and i like to believe it will all work out like this. annnyyywayyy i also <3333 top!jack and slutty!alex seriously fave
    August 10th, 2014 at 08:31am
  • hydra-station

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    OH MY GOD
    TEARS
    SO MANY OF THEM
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • firesbender

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    i was prayin' for bottom!jack but oh well

    YISSSSSS happy endings i do love those ahhh that was cute
    August 9th, 2014 at 02:50pm
  • Wave789

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    This was really good and well written and I'm a bit biased since I'm a sucker for slight unrequited love and angst with a happy ending, but whatever we'll ignore that fact XD great job :)
    August 8th, 2014 at 08:25pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i was thinking it was gonna be bottom!jack but then it was top!jack and slutty!alex and that just made it a trillion times better bc when they're set up like that it's bae
    August 8th, 2014 at 07:16pm
  • xMareBear14x

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    "Her eyes freak me out" Says every lisex hater ever. (They seriously are really creepy though.)
    August 8th, 2014 at 12:50pm
  • hottestchocolate

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    Really cute but also very sexy, thanks for writing this :)
    August 8th, 2014 at 09:51am
  • lame sauce

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    I was having such a bad morning and this put me in the best mood tbh thank you.
    August 8th, 2014 at 08:32am