Seven Minutes in Heaven: Ouran High School Host Club - Comments

@ sieglinde sullivan.
Thank-you for your comment <3 I'm not on here much anymore and it's a thrill to know people still read my items.

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the stories! ^_^ Kyoya is one of my personal favorites.

I have not written in ages and it hurts that I have not finished this series yet in SMIH. I will make the changes, thank-you for the catch! (Auto-correct does like to be a nuisance for no reason). As for using caps rather than italicized words, most of it has to do with Tamaki. He's loud and bold, and italicizing makes it feel like it's a little deal, rather than an over dramatic deal. Haha Though I do agree about the emphasis point with italicizing, and since I'm no longer 18 and juggling college as I was back then, I'll be sure to work out the kinks.

If you'd like to request a character, I'm more than willing to write about them :)

So this comment is kind of only based on Kyoya's part and Honey-senpai just because I'm more drawn to them out of everyone in the host club. Anyway, these were very cute and I think you portrayed the characters really well. They didn't feel out of character, which is nice as a reader.

With Kyoya, I really appreciated how in character he felt. I can definitely see him being a dragged into it because of Tamaki and not being interested it in lol. I like the choice of the pen, it also feels very Kyoya in a way. Of course, Tamaki is the scene stealer in this chapter, I practically died laughing once he interrupted the kiss.

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“So he DID make a move!” Rushing in, he wrapped his arms around Kyoya and giggled. “I’m so proud of you!”

That was definitely my favorite line/part of the chapter. It definitely sounds like something Tamaki would do and say, which made me love it even more. The only critique I have was just a minor spelling error, it should be exception instead of acception. And I noticed that you did use some words in all caps, but I think it would just be better if you italicized instead because for me it shows the emphasis better. But despite those two critiques, it didn't take away that this was a cute chapter and that the ending was very cute. :)

I love how you wrote Honey. You definitely had his mannerism to a tee. The choice of objects was also very Honey, and I giggled that it was a half-eaten strawberry. To be honest, I had almost expected it to be Usa-chan but I liked that it was the strawberry. It was unexpected, but it made sense. :) My heart went out to Honey because of his fear of the dark omg. I liked that you didn't go for the route of a kiss on the lips, but a kiss on the cheek. It's something I would expect of Honey and it really fit his character.

This was very cute and well written! :)

@ Halloweenlover
I have your part ready :)

@ TLOZ Master

Thanks! :)

@ Halloweenlover
Can do ;) It might be a while till I post it, but I'll get on it as soon as possible ^_^

@ TLOZ Master

Hmm, what about Yasuchika Haninozuka?

@Halloweenlover

^_^ Thanks! There are still a LOT to come. What one would you like to see next? I will do anyone :)

Awww! I loved this!! It was so cute and you stuck with all of the characters personalities perfectly!! This was truly great!!