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  • EvelynaKitty

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    Whoa! Sorry, I realize this is WAY behind on here, as opposed to where it is on hockeyfanfiction.net. I'm going to try to keep this one getting updated and thanks for reading everyone! I really appreciate it! :D
    November 7th, 2014 at 08:56pm
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    Aww, thanks so much!!!! I'm glad that you are liking it! Poor Nichy, right?
    I'm glad to know that the pace is okay to you though. That was my main worry, given how short it felt... :)
    September 2nd, 2014 at 05:19am
  • Jjropes23

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    No, it's not moving too fast in my opinion. It's moving at a fair pace considering things like that usually are fast. Your story will feel like it's slowing down more as you go. Excellent work, tugs at the heart strings a bit to read lines about an innocent man being beaten and more. All the best and I'm behind you 100%!
    September 2nd, 2014 at 03:18am
  • EvelynaKitty

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    @ Jjropes23
    Oh, that's fine! Thanks!! I'm glad that you like it and it is enjoyable! :)
    August 30th, 2014 at 10:57pm
  • Jjropes23

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    I like it so far, I read it on the other site but don't want to get a user there too. Keep up the good work!
    August 30th, 2014 at 09:38pm