Underestimate Me - Comments

@ aubs
I want details of your opinions now! Seriously, your comment made my day! Thanks for reading.

@ Alex Moore.
It sounds like she is in love with them to me. <3

@ aubs
Wow did you really read 6 chapters already?! I am totally stunned! I love that you love it and I hope you will fall in love as Nikki and I have with Josselyn, Rowen and Meredith.

We are finishing with writing this story at the moment, but not even third is posted right now. We will be making sequels though, it will be too much for one story.

Thanks again, you are amazing

I honestly have no idea what to expect when I opened up this story. The summary doesn't give much away (which isn't a bad thing, of course), which means that I'm not really sure what's going to happen.

chapter one
You have painted such an amazing picture from just the first few paragraphs. There was so much description about the environment around her without being too much; I feel that if there was any more description, it would be boring to read, but it wasn't. You've added so much description, but it helped move the story along because you also added some action scenes as well.

Just from the first chapter, there are some mysteries that I can't wait to find out. Where was she banished from and why was she banished? How many other women were banished (since she is with her sisters)? Why are men the enemy? So many things that I'm not sure about that I want to find out.

chapter two
Why are both of you amazing at writing description? Even in this chapter, there is a large amount of description that gives away the environment while adding some background information about the characters themselves.

Rowen. Just a nice man who is trying to find the criminals that are killing people. (I seriously hope it isn't the woman in the first chapter whose name I don't know and her sisters). I can already tell that there is going to be so many misunderstandings in this story. He doesn't want a war, but the girl in the first chapter thinks there is a war because she saw the men. Oh goodness.

Rowan did something to Joss in the past to make her hate him and want to kill him. BUT WHAT? I GOTTA KNOW.

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Okay, I made it to the sixth chapter before I had to leave for school, but so far, I am loving this story. Both of you authors have done a wonderful job in creating a very life-like environment as well as very belivable characters; their reasoning behind their actions are very clear, and I really can't wait to read the rest of the story when I have some more time later.

@ Alex Moore.
Leanne, that is a universal saying, I think.

@ heavymetalcowgirl
And she is completely right! Your comments are great! I love that you are loving this story, because Leanne and I have nurtured this thing to endless bounds. I still refer to it as our great beast! Hopefully, you continue to love what you read as much as Leanne and I are addicted to writing it.

@ heavymetalcowgirl
We have a saying in the Netherlands for when you are loving the things you are hearing and it goes like this: It sounds like music to my ears. (maybe its used in the english language too I have no clue) yet it does apply to your comments haha. I love reading how you are devouring our story and eventhough it is big, there is more and more to come. We will actually be making this a trilogy because its getting out of hand haha.

Please keep commenting when you read on, I'd love to know what you think!

Joss revealed her self to Rowen, i actually found this story at school on tuesday and have been reading it hungerly

@ heavymetalcowgirl
I am actually about to change the layout and I hope you will still love it then. Till what point have you read? Or have you read all our chapters already?

@ Alex Moore.
everything! the whole story line, i love the layout, everything. not a thing is less than beautiful haha

@ heavymetalcowgirl
The story? The layout? Haha I love the word, yet what is it that you find beautiful. You make me very curious!

beautiful

@ Playboy;
Thanks for those catches. We'll definitely go back and fix them as soon as we get a second. I'm glad you like the story, and I hope you keep enjoying it as you read more.

The story itself was very interesting! I read a bit and I did notice a lot of sentence fragmentation but it didn't really take away from the story at all. I'm gonna put the edits down below so you can take or keep them if you want;

. As soon as the bird had outgrew his baby claws

outgrew to outgrown

Looking for marks, other than her own or her sisters. Deep marks.

Remove the comma between marks and other.

One of the few roads that let through the forest, away from the village.

remove the comma between forest and away

Overall the story had a great and had a good flow to it - all I see is the misplacement of commas which can be easily fixed! So far good job! I'll probably read more late but so far I really like it!

@ chelseycate
We can always count on you to pick just the little things in our story that we want people to notice! You are the best. Next chapter will be up somewhere today!

Rowen's thoughts and questions about the women and their relationships are great. I think he's sort of the voice for the reader, so intrigued by the sisters and how they all interact.

Could it be he's a little jealous of Meredith being with Joss? I love how he noticed the looks and touches that Meredith gives but that Josselyn doesn't really reciprocate. I've often wondered how none sided that affection is and how that's going to play out in the rest of the story.

I like reading about Merek. He seems like a really good character and of course I still hate his father! Lol. Great chapter as always!

Favorite line, "He didn’t know where to go or what to do, but he let his feet carry him the same way the wind carried dandelion seeds."

@ chelseycate
I like your doubt towards Meredith. I do want her to be a character that is hard to love, but hard to hate either so I think translates perfectly. It always amazes me how well you get this story and what Nikki and I are trying to tell the readers. You're just good like that.

The imagery in the latest chapter is beautiful, it's something you guys do so well. I can feel and hear all the things in the forests and the valley that you write about.

One thing that stuck out to me that I loved was the use of the phrase "worshipped a cruel beauty." Idk, I just really liked that. Joss showing the place to Rowen, and Meredith getting upset about it, mirrors the storyline I think. Jealousy is a wicked thing.

Meredith is one of those character that I can't decide if I like. I know she loves Joss, it's clear she looks up to her and is loyal. But it's also sort of obsession. Which makes the story even better! Haha. Overall an amazing chapter as always!

Favorite line is, "Josselyn would not love her for it. She would call her a fool."

@ chelseycate
Thanks to the greatest commenter ever haha. Kolby will be more and more to you when you read on. Or maybe not? He;s dead right? Isn't he dead?

So I finally got around to reading the latest chapter! It was very good, as always! It was a very calm chapter, but still very powerful. There's a shift in Rowen, I feel. Something inside him maybe?

Ruth seems like a sweet girl. I loved that Rowen asked about the hair cutting which gives me more and more curiosity to Kolby (who was quite attractive according to that photo you added in the authors comment :P )

Great chapter and I can't wait to read the next!

Favorite line is, "Darkness filled every ounce of the vast wood. Crickets mocked the caravan moving almost silently through the trees."

@ Xxzackysangel6661Xx
Thanks for being so loyal to this story. We love reading your comments and input! We feel so relieved that you mentioned you worry about both Joss and Rowen, it was what we were aiming for, but you never know if its going to work out. So you telling us that means a lot!