Under a Funeral Moon - Comments

I... don't know what to think of Daniel. Haha, but what aubree james. said, he's a pervert. I think he just really needs to get laid, by someone who isn't his brothers girlfriend. The summary definitely drew me in, I was like... what's happening? this is an apocalypse and this is his problem?

Why is on house arrest? That's what I want to know, but since I'm here from my candy bowl (waaaay later) I only said I'll be reading the first chapter, I don't know. I might come back! (... because I really wanna know how he'll survive, and how Jade is and what happened to Aurora.)

Daniel seems too real, seriously. You have a good thing going on here, so far!

I'm here from comment swap woo! First of all your summary definitely drew me in. I think you describe your characters in a way that makes them seem real and not at all fake if you understand what I'm getting at. It was definitely different from all the other zombie stories I've read and I couldn't stop laughing when I was reading the part with the news cast! I hope you update soon.

I'm here from comment swap woo! First of all your summary definitely drew me in. I think you describe your characters in a way that makes them seem real and not at all fake if you understand what I'm getting at. It was definitely different from all the other zombie stories I've read and I couldn't stop laughing when I was reading the part with the news cast! I hope you update soon.

Mibba Candy Bowl: Pumpkin Spice Latte

I love apocalypse stories!

The Summary: what a fucking dick. How is fingering her going to make her feel normal? Other the that I really like this exert, a lot of people just choose something sexy to gain interest, but this is also emotional and gives us a glimpse into the characters minds.

The rest: So I like that we can tell write off the bat that the main character is an idiot. He's on house arrest, possibly works at a hospital?, and is a pervert. He has a thing for his brother's girl which definitely builds on the summary, I like that. I have to admit that he's an idiot though. Doing illegal jobs while on probation and when the cops might come is not necessarily the smartest thing I've ever heard. So I'm taking it that he's not a doctor. I like the relationship he has with Aurora though. It seems pretty natural, and I think she has a thing for him too, and it has a lot of depth. I love that it's the two of them stuck together, it sounds like a recipe for disaster and the news cast provided some great comic relief. I think that this is a great spin on the typical disease epidemic, especially since Aurora mentioned something about a disease earlier.

Overall: I really like this story. The layout is a bit difficult to read, but it has well built characters.

This is pretty awesome. It flows together nicely. I also like how it's in different views in a way with the reporter and all.

I like your story so far! I can't wait to read more.