~*Co-judge for The Stories Behind Snapchats contest*~ Oh this was so sweet! It brought me back to high school days. saying that like it's been so long since I was in high school, oh jeez. But, I liked this so much, it was so sweet and flowing and just cute. I liked how much Jordan crushed on Mary Elizabeth and I just found it excruciatingly precious. I liked how you pulled the Snapchats into the story at the very end, the big twist in the story. The way you wrote this was just really flowing, but if I did just have a suggestion, it would be to pay attention to the dialogue and making sure that you make sure that each person gets a new paragraph when they speak, instead of putting it all in one paragraph because it tends to get confusing when you have more than one person talking. Other than that, my dear, this was a really fun read and I finished it with hoping that they do bide their time and they do get back together. I encourage a sequel just to know if and how they get back together! I'm rooting for them! Really, though, this story makes me happy and it was quick and cute and fun. Keep on writing and have fun and good luck!
Oh this was so sweet! It brought me back to high school days. saying that like it's been so long since I was in high school, oh jeez. But, I liked this so much, it was so sweet and flowing and just cute. I liked how much Jordan crushed on Mary Elizabeth and I just found it excruciatingly precious. I liked how you pulled the Snapchats into the story at the very end, the big twist in the story. The way you wrote this was just really flowing, but if I did just have a suggestion, it would be to pay attention to the dialogue and making sure that you make sure that each person gets a new paragraph when they speak, instead of putting it all in one paragraph because it tends to get confusing when you have more than one person talking. Other than that, my dear, this was a really fun read and I finished it with hoping that they do bide their time and they do get back together. I encourage a sequel just to know if and how they get back together! I'm rooting for them! Really, though, this story makes me happy and it was quick and cute and fun. Keep on writing and have fun and good luck!