Funhouse - Comments

I still love Elle! I need to know whats happening. So many secrets! :D Can't wait to read more! Updat soon! :)

hahahah oh hell... elle is relentless when it comes to training.. kinda feel sorry for hannah now..
and the 'but he's old' comment were so funny! same with the statement that the only running brian knows is after chicks..

oooooh! him walking in on elle when she's in the shower........ now that was sexual tension at it's finest

Can't wait for more and wow Elle is very hard with training I hope Hannah doesn't get to worn out and has an accident xxxxx

ooh she's got some kind of secret that johnny knows??
and holy hell that's a lot of money..
can't wait to see how her training hannah will go..

I love this so much and please keep updating fast, love Brian and Elle is this and I love Hannah as well as Brian's little trainee, I hope there is a chapter where Hannah gets caught by Brian or something, please update soon xxxx

well damn I totally missed this new sequel- but that just gave me a huge doze of the story at one time so..
missed elle and her crazy personality.. she's just awesome..!
and hannah seems half as crazy as elle so that's good fun too!
heheheh matt being totally paranoid- going to church and shit like that.. just totally hilarious!
hmm.. hiring elle? dunno if that'll be good or bad though.. her and syn seems to have this relationship that'll either kill one of them or make them end up in bed at one point..

The boss sure won't like it that Jimmy and Syn will go behind his back and call Elle :D. And I feel like Hannah is going to learn so much from Elle, but in the same time I think she might be jealous of her. Anyways, we need to find out first if Elle really wants to help them... Can't wait for the next update :D.

I love this and can't wait, Brian is such a hit trainer, training Hannah and I wonder what's going to happen to her, Brian is really mad xxx

Sounds funny that you couldn't write about Elle :)). You wrote like 30 chapters about her :D. But as long as you got your inspiration back, everything's great :D. Can't wait for the next update :D.

Hey thanks! I thought about writing a completely new story with this plot, but I kind of couldn't get a grip of the main character, but then I realized it's Elle! Duh.
Anyhow, yeah, Syn never was wise around the women. :D
Thanks, love!

I like this sequel more than the previous one. The fact that Elle Morrison is missing and no one knows about her (except Syn, it seems) sure brings an interesting and thrilling vibe to the story :D. And Hannah is amazing. She's like Elle's sister :D. Just as crazy and just as badass ;). Poor Syn... He's surrounded by crazy women :D. Anyways, keep up the good work! :D