For starters, I adore your style of writing. It encapsulates every being of the character, and that's truly lovely! Not only am I following the tale of these two humans who are attracted to each other (yet possess horrid timing), but I can also feel it in my veins how they feel and the frustration within it all. It may be because it's such a relatable emotion and situation, or that your writing is so wonderful that it manages to clearly depict that; and I believe it's the latter.
The multiple perspectives allows the reader to fully understand the story not only from one side, but both and I think that served the plot so magnificently well.
I think that maybe you love the idea of loving me.
BAAM! That's when you captivated my heart. Damn, that sentence is so close to my heart because hell, I'm the queen at falling for the idea of someone rather than who they are as a person and truthfully, I don't think you could've described that in a better way either. Looooove it!
To conclude, your conclusion was great because it not only ended the story but it also gave room for us to wonder whether Blake tried to make things right and prove his love, or if he just walked away. Overall: this is truly wonderful!
The multiple perspectives allows the reader to fully understand the story not only from one side, but both and I think that served the plot so magnificently well.
I think that maybe you love the idea of loving me.
BAAM! That's when you captivated my heart. Damn, that sentence is so close to my heart because hell, I'm the queen at falling for the idea of someone rather than who they are as a person and truthfully, I don't think you could've described that in a better way either. Looooove it!
To conclude, your conclusion was great because it not only ended the story but it also gave room for us to wonder whether Blake tried to make things right and prove his love, or if he just walked away. Overall: this is truly wonderful!