Archaic Kinds of Fun - Comments

I think I've read this story about 5 times now and it just seems better and better everytime. I cant wait for the next update whenever that may be. ❤❤

@ TheIronBat
I love me some emotional and some fluff! Will be reading right away. Thanks for giving the story a go! I am also on A03 if you wanna read it there (as Gervas1981). Unfortunately I've hit a bit of a lull with the story, and I've had my doubts about whether it was any good. I'll try to get back into it, especially now that I've gotten an approval lol.

@ Lily Barnes
Thank you for the comment!

Yeah, the thought of Tony having a bodyguard seemed hilarious to me so I decided to run with it. And now I'm at almost fifty chapters. Oh yeah, the beginning of the story is a bit of a mess. I've cleaned it up, but I haven't gotten around to re-posted the edited chapters on here. If you read on fanfiction.net - the story is posted there as well, same name and everything, and the edited chapters have been posted.

Again, thank you for the comment!

Hi, new reader here! Your first chapter has me intrigued. You drew me in with the idea of an Avenger needing a bodyguard and I actually laughed out loud when you revealed it would be Tony. He reacted just the way we all thought he would at needing a (female) bodyguard, lol. One note I have is that you switch back and forth between past and present tense in the first chapter and might want to revise it. Great story so far, though! Can't wait to read more!

@ A7XLizardQueen
I'm glad you liked them! It did feel weird writing after staying gone for so long, but I missed the story so it felt good to get back into it. This new chapter was emotional to write, so I hope you like it! (The next one will probably be emotional too, but then I'm going back to my fluff. I miss the fluff.)

I started the first chapter of your story, and it's AMAZING!!! I am definitely going to keep reading it, so expect a comment or two from me soon!

Good chapters!!! I liked the tone you set and I think you did just fine for having not written for the story in a while! Can't wait for the next update, no pressure of course, keep on feeling better!!

@ TheIronBat
YAY!!!! I am going to read the new chapters ASAP!!!! I have started posting my Marvel story, so nervous about it, it's called A Life to Remember: http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/616106/A-Life-to-Remember/

I just saw your other comment about a show with Squirrel Girl?!?! Soooo cool!!! I haven't heard about it at all so I'll to do some digging and see where I can watch it.

A scene between Loki and a Norse-mythology lover would be absolutely hilarious!! Can't wait to see if you decide to write that or not. Okay, I'm going to read, and then I will most likely leave another comment with my thoughts!! :p

Glad to hear you're feeling better!!!

@ Tiny-Girl
I DID SEE THAT! I can't remember what I was doing or looking up, but I remember seeing the words "squirrel girl" and "show" and then I nearly had a heart attack. I'm really hoping they do her justice, because she's one of my all-time favorite characters.

This story has now been updated though! Twice! So thank you for reading and thank you so much for the comment!

@ A7XLizardQueen
Deadpool is...Deadpool. lol. If he wants to pop into the therapy sessions, I can't stop him. I am trying to slowly build everyone up into a trusting team, and the therapy sessions will help with that. I'm glad you think I got all of the characterizations right too! That's one of my biggest worries, especially since I'm writing for so many characters. I'm always scared that I'm going to mess up.

Haha, that is a definitely possibility! I have a plan, somewhere down the road, of Thor and Loki venturing out and trying to blend in while learning new things. So there's a defintely possibility that they could bump into some random girl named Jessica who just so happens to love Norse mythology. (Oh God, now I'm picturing Thor and Darcy trying not to laugh while this happy-go-lucky stranger explains who Sleipnir is while Loki fumes in the background.)

I posted two chapters!! I'm sorry it took so long, but I was sick for a while. I'm slowly getting better though! So hopefully the updates will be a little quicker this time around.

And I would to read your marvel story! Just let me know if you post it and I'll check it out :)

Just making sure you know, Marvel has a new show set for 2018 called New Warriors and one of the heroes is Squirrel Girl!!! I'm so excited and it made me realize I really miss this story!

@ TheIronBat
OMG I love that Deadpool just decided to randomly show up for Sam's therapy sessions. Best part and totally countered all the heavy stuff from everyone else's sessions. Can't wait to see how the story starts to play out now that everyone is going to be more open with each other. I think you hit the character's pretty well, too. I didn't read anyone and think 'They'd never say that' so good job. I'm really interested to see Loki and Thor exploring their new world, please don't skate over that.

Actually I think it would be hilarious if Loki and Thor went travelling and met some completely normal human who's really into Norse mythology (or history in general) and she tells them all the stories (like about Loki birthing Sleipnir). And then she becomes like a tour guide to them. That's just a little thought from my head but it's your story... And you know if she was named Jessica I wouldn't oppose that either lol

Either way I can't wait to see how things turn out and I'm super happy that you FINALLY posted a new chapter and please please please don't make me wait so long again!!!

By the way, I am also working on a Marvel story. When I have enough of it written to start posting I'll let you know cause I'd love to get your opinion on it. I'm still in the early chapters and still doing A LOT of research for it so it might be a while but who knows, I'm pretty excited about it.

@ A7XLizardQueen
I know it's been forever, but I finally updated! I hope you get a chance to read, because I always enjoy reading your opinions. And thanks again for commenting!

@ TheIronBat

I'm glad you find my comments and thoughts helpful, I will read and let you know. I also see you wrote a bunch of Supernatural stuff recently, are those all connected to in the same universe?

@ A7XLizardQueen
Haha, nope! I'm still kicking :D

I would love to know your thoughts on my other stories! I have two supernatural stories that are connected, but it's been a while since I've updated them :'(

It's Irresistible is the Gotham story that I'm working on now. Oh! I also started a Pinisher story based off of the Daredevil Netflix series.

And sorry for spamming you with all my stories. lol. But I do really love your comments and opinions :)

@ TheIronBat

I was just making sure you didn't die on me or something :p

I will have to take a look at your other stories though :)

@ A7XLizardQueen

Hi! I'm sorry for taking so long to update! I've been working on one of my other stories. It's a Gotham story, if you've seen the show and are interested in reading it!

I haven't given up on AKOF though, I promise! I'll try to update it soon :)

Where've you been girl?! I'm seriously missing me some Jo Holbrook and Bruce Banner!

@ TheIronBat

Can't wait to see what kind of shenanigans he gets in to.

Warmness on the Soul as your wedding march song sounds epic! Yeah my A7X tat is also my first one. Finally getting another one after 6 years on the 20th, super excited, this one isn't A7X though, it's LOTR, another thing that got me through the tough times.

I had a great Christmas, visited my in-laws in France, and now I will have to binge-read the story, what a shame lol, so that I can catch up on everything I missed over the holiday.

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you too!!

@ A7XLizardQueen
I already think of Loki as a badass, but Evil Badass Loki? That would be fun to write. But there will be some Loki shenanigans in the story eventually.

Oh, I believe it! A7X was there for my teen years too. My best friend's wedding march song was "Warmness On The Soul." I'm glad you got to see them in concert though! I'm sure it's one of those experiences you'll never forget. lol. My first tattoo was an A7X one, and I used to write A7X fanfiction too. Those were the good ol' days.

Thanks again for commenting on the story! It's just been updated, so I hope you enjoy reading it!

PS: I hope you had a merry christmas and have a good new year!

@ TheIronBat
Yeah a total baddy Loki would be awesome. But of course there has to be mischief, even if he is a good guy. He is the god of mischief after all and he would be no fun without it.

A7X totally got me through my teenage years too! I used to fall asleep listening to them if you can believe that lol. I hope you get to see them in concert, they're so good. I've seen them three times now. Unfortunately the first time I saw them was only after the Rev died. But it was still one of the greatest experiences of my life. I had just gotten my A7X tattoo like a week, maybe not even, before I went to the concert. It was still itchy lol and I stood in front of the stage for hours, and held on to the railing at the front for hours through a bunch of other bands until finally they came on. And it will be one of those experiences that I will remember for the rest of my life.

I just hope that if I see them again I still have the same stamina that I did then to stick around the mosh pits cause there's some crazy bitches in there lol. I had one chick like trying to climb over me so the security guards had to take her away. Oh to be eighteen again lol

Definitely loving the story and can't wait for more!