Do Not Resuscitate - Comments

  • SpazMonkeyBeck

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    This is the first comment I have ever written.. And I want to say Thank You.

    You'll likely never see this, your account has long since been inactive, but I want you to know that I think you are a terrific writer. This was beautifully tragic and heartbreakingly accurate.

    I felt every word as I read them, for the three hours I've been reading this I WAS Dannilynn, although I have only ever felt some of her pain for myself, your writing brought all of it and more back to the surface. Not in a bad way, i'm just in the 'afterglow' of reading something so impactful that I wanted to leave this comment.

    Just to say Thank You.
    June 20th, 2019 at 02:05pm
  • clandestine5009

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    Thabk you for this. It was wrll worth the wait.
    May 9th, 2016 at 04:53am
  • OMFGitsBeckiie

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    I finally got to finishing this. It's not how I wanted it to end but it was still strangely beautifully done. And I'm mad Bc I'm on my lunch break and I started, and still am, choking up. I loved this story. Sometimes we need a different ending than we wanted, and I honestly hope that this story shed some light on how serious these types of situations can be. Again, I loved it, and I honestly want to thank you for writing it, even if this comes off a little strange. I hope to read more stories from you.
    May 6th, 2016 at 05:59pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    I just finished this and oh my gosh, I can't believe its over or how well I can relate to he feelings at times, I hate you still have your dark days we all do tho I'm normally free if you need to talk.

    This ending for me was perfect tbo , I'm not sure if she would have made it the connection would have been as strong for me that is.

    Also, I know you're attached to Danby, but just because she is gone doesn't mean there couldn't be a sequel with the sister and a new person to attatch to if you ever got the urge for more.

    Much <3 Kat.
    April 12th, 2016 at 07:28am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    My heart hurt reading the last couple of chapters but you did such an amazing job writing this. It sort of hit home for me in a couple parts but I'm oddly happy that it ended the way it did. Well done.
    April 7th, 2016 at 12:43am
  • Kara Vengeancee

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    I am ugly sobbing.

    This was so beautifully written and I'm surprisingly happy with how it ended, no matter how sad it was.
    April 4th, 2016 at 01:50am
  • Leaving Memories

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    I cried. I cried like a little baby. I have no words to say for how this ended. It hit close to home and my heart hurts that this has ended. But, you wrote this beautifully and I'm so sorry that you have moments in your life that you feel like this. It breaks my heart because I'd never wish that upon anyone.
    This story, albeit sad and painful and heart wrenching, was probably one of the best stories I've ever read. And if I ever saw this on the shelves of a book store, I'd buy it in a heartbeat because it captivated me that much.
    I don't know what else to put in the little comment box to show how much I appreciated this story, so maybe I'll just say thank you, instead of trying to find words to express how much this story meant to me. Thank you for putting this story on Mibba and creating a beautiful masterpiece.
    March 23rd, 2016 at 05:56am
  • fiction246

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    I was saddened by the last two chapters but after reading your comments at the end, I understand why you ended this story in this way. When I read something, I am always looking for the happy ending, but in the case of this story, I can understand how a happy ending for Dani wouldn't have been right. So as much as it hurt to read it and the pain that it is causing Brooklyn, you have written a great story, and I hope that you can get through the bad moments in your own life and find the good. Which I know can be easier said than done. <3
    March 22nd, 2016 at 01:19am
  • ShadowMooses

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    I'm currently crying right now, and take that as a compliment because not many authors on this site are able to produce such emotion. You're a gifted writer. Hope you're well though, and hope that somehow this was an outlet for you. But in all honesty, thank you for providing me with such captivating reading, and I wish you all the best. Thank you.
    March 22nd, 2016 at 12:41am
  • Rileyiggy

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    This story broke my heart. Thank you so much for your honest portrayal. Like most, I was hoping for a happy ending but I understand that this is probably more realistic. It's been years since a fic has impacted me so deeply. You have undeniable talent and I thank you for sharing your gift with us. I selfishly hope that one day you'll do a sequel that focuses on Brooklyn because, based on the epilogue, I'm sure there's potential there. But I understand if this is the end. It's been such a captivating read. Thank you again!
    March 21st, 2016 at 12:37pm
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    That was perfect and real and raw. I love it. I love that it didn't end well because at one time, I was Dani and I wanted to take pills to end my life. I loved this and it feels good that Dani died because the girl inside of me who wanted to die, did die, and I became free.
    March 21st, 2016 at 02:26am
  • K.Shadows

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    I cried my way through this entire story. Though we all wish to read stories full of fluff and happy endings, this is realistic. I applaud you for showing what mental illness is really like. I struggle with these thoughts every day and feel like a prisoner in my own mind. And you're so right. It can't be cured by romance, or happy endings. Depression is still depression at the end of the day, no matter how good a day it was. I hope stories and things of the like, like this, help people understand mental illness better. You deserve a huge hug. Thank you so much.
    March 21st, 2016 at 01:37am
  • A Synful Vengeance

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    Very Happy looking forward to more
    March 4th, 2016 at 07:31am
  • fiction246

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    Brooklyn is so sweet!! I hope she is the ray of sunshine that can get Danny through this!! Looking forward to more :)
    March 3rd, 2016 at 01:18am
  • abigail.

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    As much as I absolutely love this story, I feel like this inner monologue with Danny is almost getting exhausting. I get why she's going through it, because I've been there. But as a story that isn't updated incredibly frequently, I feel like it would benefit us readers more to have the plot moving a little more.

    I could be wrong, maybe I'm a small minority haha. But I do love this story, and I really absolutely love how Danny had a little bit of a temper tantrum. I feel like that's a step in the right direction. Keep up the great work!
    February 29th, 2016 at 02:09am
  • EmilieAlyosha

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    She spoke! In complete sentences and gave somewhat responses! She spoke! Progress. Sort of.

    Glad you updated. I've missed this story.
    February 28th, 2016 at 11:26pm
  • voodoochild .

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    Such a wonderful story you have written .
    I usually don't write comments on stories , but this one pulls at a certain heart string of mine .
    Its written beautifully , I love how descriptive you are (which is a hard thing to find these days .)
    And I honestly light up when I see that you've updated .

    Again , I love this story .
    February 28th, 2016 at 07:37pm
  • Rileyiggy

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    I stumbled upon this story while on vacation after years of being away from fanfiction. I've reread it twice. It is so good! I really hope you update it! I made an account just to subscribe. It's so so so good and relatable!
    February 17th, 2016 at 01:40am
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    So I've been behind for a while just caught up and it's like this story just does something to me it pulls hard at my emotions aND I love it.

    More soon I hope.

    Much ♡ Kat.
    January 27th, 2016 at 01:49pm
  • abigail.

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    I really hope she starts to feel more okay with herself and her life. God I love this story.
    December 12th, 2015 at 09:33am