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IT WAS WORTH IT!
I didn't read this when I was babysitting with you coz I wanted to read it finished.
I think you could have made it longer and maybe developed Ryan's dad as a character more, but other than that it was brill, obv.
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May 26th, 2008 at 12:55pm
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Hahaha. That was good.
Don't tell Mum...*wipes away tear of laughter*
Very good.
May 25th, 2008 at 11:57am
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Came from listening to ABBA, hence the name.
Somewhat, anti-climatic perhaps.
Let me know what you think, please.
May 25th, 2008 at 11:55am
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I didn't read this when I was babysitting with you coz I wanted to read it finished.
I think you could have made it longer and maybe developed Ryan's dad as a character more, but other than that it was brill, obv.
:cute: