Sylar is one of my favorite characters on the show, and I think you've nailed him pretty well in this story. I hope you continue with it. I enjoyed reading it very much.
I love this story so far! You got his secretive,psycotic side down perfectly!I can't wait until she finds out or it accidentaly slips! I LOVE HIM!!!*and Peter* Sooo hot! Anyways you should checkout my Heroes story. Its an Peter/OC.