August 10th, 2008 at 11:28am
Since when did Brendon want to foxtrot? And since when did he expect me to lead?
I love the unexpectedness, how Brendon is just...someone else. And then Gabe recognizes this as it happens, as they danced and when they were talking.
But it was a simple statement of facts combined with the grin that was lacking in its past intensity, purely because what he said was not meant to be happy either - my favorite line; it stuck in my head.
And finally when Gabe left the room, and Brendon panicked. Showing he was still the same person, under the new personality, and new eyes.
It was beautiful, you have a lot of talent =]
I fail at commenting. But I just wanted you to know that that was an amazing story. Really.