The Indians of Bending Creek - Comments

  • MANEATER.

    MANEATER. (150)

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    I know you have yet to complete this story but I have honestly enjoyed where you are taking it very much. I know you wondered whether you were going to be kicked out because of some of the elements you added but I should have been more clear in my rules by stating that as long as there was no graphic rape then that’s fine. I’m perfectly fine with rape being apart of a story because it happens in real life, but reading it written out could be triggering for people and I don’t much care to read graphic rape myself. I also only asked you to tell me about the picture and you’ve done a wonderful job of that. Jay is such an interesting character and I really want to know more about him! Everyone’s so mysterious at this point and things are only starting to unravel with the latest revelation that Anne and Jack have had sex. The plot you’ve written about the school being on native ground is incredibly interesting and I’m really wondering where the story will go as their plan unravels, they’ve already scared the crap out of the students, so what’s next?! I’m excited to know. You did a great job of developing a world around the picture that you chose and because of that you deserve first place whole-heartedly. Can’t wait to see where this story goes next!
    November 11th, 2014 at 02:31am
  • southpaw

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    This is really awesome and interesting! Jascer is a very compelling protagonist, and his narration is witty and fun to read. I like his interactions with the other characters too, and I also like the triangle between Jay, Annabelle, and Jackson - I don't know what's up Annabelle's sleeve, but I'm really curious to see just what she has in her head, because she gives off a mysterious vibe. Anyways, keep up the great work! :)
    October 7th, 2014 at 07:19pm