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  • lady_enygma

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    Oh my word I am absolutely in love with this story. I love how dark Pete is in it, yet that there's still a level of humanity about him. I love the whole idea of the story.... and why do I get the feeling from the last bit of that last chapter that Bree has now summoned him
    January 24th, 2017 at 01:56am
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    I am so liking this! The nice mix of supernatural and Pete Wentz makes me giddy ^_^
    On another note, I like how you wrote Seth's 'want' of her. Very realistic :)
    You may sense that I am really enjoying this story and I can't wait to see how it spans out!
    September 3rd, 2015 at 04:07am
  • folie a deux

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    oh my god that was intense...my heart aches for Sophie, she doesn't deserve any of this :( I'm interested to see how on earth she's going to transition into this lifestyle. like I wonder if she's every going to become used to it. I can't even imagine taking another person's life ugh...I feel so bad for her!!
    August 6th, 2015 at 04:41pm
  • folie a deux

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    well at least Sophie went out in a blaze of glory, haha. I don't blame her for getting totally trashed, I probably would too. I mean she has nothing to look forward to for the next year and probably the rest of eternity in hell lmao. I can't wait to see how this whole thing goes and how her and Pete will get along...also I'm still dreading Seth coming back into the picture No
    June 30th, 2015 at 08:49pm
  • folie a deux

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    oh my god that is so much better than I expected. of course he would be a little cheeky fucker about this, I mean it is Pete after all. that really sucks for Sophie though, she really fucked up. and I really hope Seth doesn't remember what happened otherwise that'll make it 1000x worse for her...
    May 25th, 2015 at 08:20pm
  • EpilepticTechno

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    The suspense is killing me, I'm so curious as to what the deal is. I haven't read any band fics in a long time and boy, am I glad I stumbled across this one. Definitely subscribed and looking forward to your next post!
    May 9th, 2015 at 03:52am
  • folie a deux

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    OMG thank you for dedicating that other chapter to me bb...I HAD NO IDEA THAT YOU WOULD ACTUALLY GO THROUGH WITH IT THOUGH HOLY SHIT...

    every chapter throws me for a loop, I seriously have no clue what's going to happen next...will Seth remember any of that? will he think he just slipped and hit his head or something? and HOW IDIOTIC WAS THAT MOVE SOPHIE MADE I MEAN SERIOUSLY...she's probably gonna die in like five years now or something even WORSE...ugh this story is distressing me so bad but it's soooo good!!!
    March 24th, 2015 at 05:21am
  • ToxicMayson

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    I'm very nervous as to what the new deal is and where the hell Sophie is!
    March 23rd, 2015 at 05:09am
  • LiacideXIII

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    Oh holy shit, the way this was written definitely threw me through a loop, though I had a feeling from the beginning that something terrible was going to happen. I’m a huge Supernatural fan and I know exactly how bad deals can go if not made specific. This was very well written and the only mistake I can think of through this all would be a few spelling errors. This is nothing to big honestly. I can’t wait to see how Pete retaliates to her doing this and losing him her soul, I’m assuming he is probably going to be very angry about that! Subscribing and Recommending, keep up the excellent work!
    March 3rd, 2015 at 11:53pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Oh holy shit, the way this was written definitely threw me through a loop, though I had a feeling from the beginning that something terrible was going to happen. I’m a huge Supernatural fan and I know exactly how bad deals can go if not made specific. This was very well written and the only mistake I can think of through this all would be a few spelling errors. This is nothing to big honestly. I can’t wait to see how Pete retaliates to her doing this and losing him her soul, I’m assuming he is probably going to be very angry about that! Subscribing and Recommending, keep up the excellent work!
    March 3rd, 2015 at 11:52pm
  • chisammy

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    First off, I am completely hooked on this story already! I don't normally read Pete Wentz fan-fiction, but I'm really glad that I stumbled upon this one. I won't lie, at first I thought that Pete was the boss that Sophie was lusting after and it came as a sort of plot twist when he turned out to be the demon instead. I loved that you basically weaved in some bits from Supernatural as well, that was a plus. Your writing style is very likable and it's easy to get sucked into the story. Overall, I loved it and I can't wait to read more of it :)
    March 3rd, 2015 at 09:58pm
  • Lady of Bats

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    I've read the first chapter and I have to say that I enjoyed it. It was interesting to see how the protagonist is thinking and her actions. I think that her name could probably have been mentioned earlier in the chapter, though. The only thing I noticed was that at times - especially in the summary - you would have connecting words like "and" and "but" starting sentences. This can be effective sometimes, but in my opinion it's best to avoid doing that. Other than that, I didn't pick up on any grammatical or spelling errors, so that's great. I like that you added in a potential reasoning for why Sophie has these feelings for her boss. That was a neat touch.

    All in all, it's a cool concept for a story and well worth the read.
    March 2nd, 2015 at 10:41am
  • ToxicMayson

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    As always so happy this was updated Very Happy and I'm like happy that he is gone but also terrified! If that makes sense lol and I can't wait for Pete!
    February 21st, 2015 at 02:15am
  • folie a deux

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    “I’m usually paying attention—I like to keep an eye on my investments.”

    oh my god I love that line, I don't know why, but it's so PETE. I can clearly picture him as this mischievous demon boy haha. god I hope she kills Seth. he's really fucking scary and this is not going to end well for her. it's just gonna go too far until one of them gets hurt beyond repair.
    February 3rd, 2015 at 06:38pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    My day always gets ten times better when this is updated! Plus it was an update with Pete!! I'm scared of Seth and scared for Sophie. Why must this dral with Pete be so complicated!! Haha loving the story Smile
    February 3rd, 2015 at 06:33am
  • folie a deux

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    ugh I knew something was going to go wrong!! I'm really scared for Sophie because it's clear Seth is headed down the path of abusive obsession and it's making me anxious...
    January 6th, 2015 at 10:54pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    Whoa Seth is scaring me a little
    January 6th, 2015 at 03:29pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    It wasn't short lol It was fine :) and whoa that man is kinda hot
    January 2nd, 2015 at 05:32am
  • folie a deux

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    OH DAMN I KNEW IT WAS GONNA BE GOOD
    December 30th, 2014 at 05:12pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    I was seriously jumping up and down when I saw this was updated :D
    December 29th, 2014 at 10:51am