Wicked Ways - Comments

  • killa thot.

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    Here because of comment swap!

    First of all, there are some minor grammar mistakes but none that can't be overlooked. I thought that the story was confusing in the way that it moved back and forth between the past and the future and that the main character was a bit forced, but all in all I enjoyed reading it and thought her relationship with Matt was pretty cute.
    December 31st, 2014 at 12:49am
  • purple89

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    why is it that all the stories you have up need to be updated?! hurry up woman!! i want to know what happens next!!!
    November 7th, 2014 at 06:39pm
  • simply amanda;

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    I love this!
    November 7th, 2014 at 03:10am
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    @ NikkiFoxy8
    Thank you! I will get to work on it today!!
    October 31st, 2014 at 02:04pm
  • NikkiFoxy8

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    I really love it already! Please update soon! Very Happy
    October 30th, 2014 at 02:35pm
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    @ Ca20000
    Working on it now. Thank you! you're awesome!
    October 28th, 2014 at 10:02pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    That would be great cant wait xxx
    October 28th, 2014 at 10:00pm
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    @ Ca20000
    I was considering that, and even wrote it that way, but I just couldn't get it to work. But I will try another one that way. I want to see how this does. Thank you for being awesome. I could incorporate some flashbacks for you?
    October 28th, 2014 at 09:39pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    This is good but I was kinda hopin for the gang kidnapping and then making her clean,cook all that sort of stuff but this is very good xxxxx
    October 28th, 2014 at 09:36pm
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    @ Ca20000
    Thank you. I will get started tonight. :)
    October 28th, 2014 at 02:31pm
  • Abeautiful7DisasterX

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    Thank you. I will get started tonight. :)
    October 28th, 2014 at 02:31pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Hey I love gang storiesile this so please update this soon xxxx
    October 28th, 2014 at 08:54am