EVERYONE MY POOR SWEET BABIES THIS WAS WONDERFUL OH MY GOSH I WANT TO SOB OH WAIT I AM SOBBING NO WAIT PLEASE HELP
(I noticed once or twice it said "Harry" instead of "Jack": "I've gone insane harry." and "I love you harry Edward styles but you..." so I must ask, was this a different fic at first? It wasn't distracting at all, the story was still wonderful, you did an awesome job! )
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MY HEART I JUST NOPE HELP TOO BEAUTIFUL YET SO TRAGIC