Second Heartbeat - Comments

hellokaykayy (100)

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Please update !!!

February 22nd, 2015 at 07:18pm

Jenna_A7X (100)

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I love it!!!!!!

February 2nd, 2015 at 04:07am

akmo4725 (100)

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Aw wee this chapter was so adorable!! I can't wait for the next one to see how happy all the guys are with this news!!!

January 22nd, 2015 at 01:56am

sissylala (100)

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I think this is adorable, but it'd be much easier if all the names weren't typed out repeatedly. You could maybe try just saying " The Uncles" " The Aunts" and "Kiddos" ? Just some helpful tips.

It's a great story, and I can't wait to read more.

November 8th, 2014 at 02:41am

Synful_Shadows (100)

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@ Jenna_A7X
It just gets cuter

November 8th, 2014 at 02:01am

Jenna_A7X (100)

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Aww i love this

November 8th, 2014 at 01:13am