He Remembers - Comments

  • I like the name Gin. But anywho, this was a ride and definitely not what I expected, but in a good way. I like Gin as a character and I like how you incorporated memory loss into this, rather than just describing someone's skin, you know? It's different and I liked that.

    The only problem I have with this story is the layout. I had to use the default layout in order to read it, but other than that, great job!
    November 15th, 2014 at 01:04am