I read the whole story today, and I fell in love with it. Your writing skills are fantastic and I can't wait to read more of your work! Would you ever do a sequel?
Their 'I love you's were so ambiguous. Are they, or aren't they, finally getting together?!?!?!?! If anything, it just makes me hate Jon a little bit more for continuously leading Aspen on and getting jealous & possessive about her. And Aspen... It's sad to see her in so much pain because she loves Jon too much with all her heart. It really isn't fair to her. Great chapter; please update soon. :)