Rage and Ruin - Comments

That's the way! :D

@ Brian Haner Jr
I think I'm onto something..I've changed some parts and it feels much better :D

Hey, it happens. You just gotten find your groove and your path and hope they mesh haha

@ Brian Haner Jr
Doesn't help that I'm so indecisive

Starting is always the worst, also the hardest. It's a curse.

@ Brian Haner Jr
Keeping you on your toes

I can't decide how to start it off

I thought you did, I was like "...wait...wasn't there a chapter to this...I'm losing my shit."

@ Brian Haner Jr
I've since deleted the first chapter and changed it around completely

I know that feeling well. Like you take a break and then you come back and are like "How do I English?" It's terrible really.
Excellent
One sentence, a good start
I think it gets the job done, anything longer would drag on and give too much away. Short and sweet with just enough to entice. Good job :D

@ Brian Haner Jr
I'm good now. I think. XD It was just a case of not writing anything in eons and being scared that I was shit at it
There will be much banging of hips
So, chapter 2 is still at one sentence
What do you think of the new summary?

@ opulence
Thank you so much for your feedback. I've taken it on board and fleshed out the summary a little bit. Not much, because I don't want to give anything away, but I think it's enough?

[From comment the summary!]

The summary is super short and leaves much to be desired; it is not a summary, as much as it is a statement that has to do with the story. Depending on how long the completed product is, it can be a very effective way of letting a potential reader know what was going to happen or what the story is about, but for anything longer it leaves out a lot of content that could potentially be in the story/be important to the story, which is what a summary is really about. If you plan on making this long, I would expand on it. If not, it gets the job done.

Oh no! Are you okay now?!
Good. Gooood. This pleases me
YAY!!

@ Brian Haner Jr
My anxiety levels were so high when I posted this
This is me you're talking to, of course they're going to bang hips
I'm working on chapter 2! :D

*Internal screaming*

I love this! I'm so glad you were able to write something, it makes one of us haha I'm really intrigued by what you have, and by what it could lead to. Is Matt the bad guy? Is he the good guy? Is he a bad that that's not involved until she makes him involved? Hitman for hire?! Bang hips with him either way Alis!

I love this and I can't wait for you to be struck by the inspiration bug again :D

omg, this was intense! cant wait to read more!

Great chapter I'm really looking forward to more :)

Omg, the Stilinski feels

@ Brian Haner Jr
I've only now seen this comment

But thank you!!

@ RoCk_PrInCeSs_PR
Hopefully, it will be a roller coaster ride of emotions

I love MC stories and A7X, so I can't wait to see where this will go.