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  • Death_to_Roses

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    This story is really great so far! I like that you're giving the protagonist a back story and it actually being significant enough for us to be on the edge of our seats waiting to see what it is. A lot of these kinds of stories are just kinda word-for-word repetitions of the movie and stick with the dialogue without adding anything on the side. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
    January 25th, 2015 at 10:41pm
  • niklitera

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    Well, she does have a missing cousin...
    January 25th, 2015 at 06:21pm
  • goddess-moon-child

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    Is she related to Star Lord from Guardians of the Galaxy?
    January 25th, 2015 at 03:45am
  • meowfness

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    Two chapters in and no comments? For shame! I must remedy this immediately! Haha. Is it sad that I can picture the movie going on in my head and just kinda plop your OOC in there? Maybe, maybe not. I do, however, know that it takes an excellent writer to make that happen, so kudos. Can't wait to read more!
    November 21st, 2014 at 11:25pm
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