Shadow - Comments

This is amazing. I really love this!! I know there is a sequel so will that be a full length story? Like please. There is so much more to say and develop with this story.

HaH! You'd be killing me if you don't continue this Stevie! I mean it's just so awesome! And I really regret I'm not the first person to comment you know :( I think I read this as soon as you posted, but from my mobile haha So couldn't comment (yep, it's old fashioned stuff that won't let me login) . But yep, don't be confused. Go on, this is worth it! (:

Oooh. NO wonder. Whoever made the layout needs to darken the white a bit. XD You're welcome. I left a response on your blog about the short or long story sequel.

@ Black Moon Lady Hina

Unfortunately it's a pre made background so I can't :'(
I am trying to make one for it though, I'm just fiddling around with the settings. The white is a bit blinding - I don't usually use white for the main backgrounds so It's killing my eyes aswell, haha.

Thank you :) I'm still trying to decide between short stories or a big one though.
I have all he idea in my head - start to finish. But it's just the formatting that's bothering me.

You should definitely continue this, Stevie! Might I suggest making the white a little bit darker in the layout? Not too dark but just a bit so the brightness doesn't hurt anyone's eyes?

Other wise this story is spooky and I wanna know what happens next!

@ Death The Angel

-bounces with happiness- Haha.

Thank you so much. I was a little worried that I went far to vague (because I didnt even name them, most people hate that). I'm so happy you think it's good ^.^

I was sitting down to write my NaNo novel and my fingers just started moving and this happened. It just happened. Haha. I was listening to a writing playlist for one of my other stories and 'Killpop' by Slipknot came on and I started thinking "this is a beautifully twisted love song..." and then I started typing and it just flowed. It was so amazing to have that much inspiration, even if it only lasted half an hour. Haha

Yay! Cause I really wanted to write the sequel. :D haha.
I was going to make it either one big chaptered thing, or divide it into small bits and pieces, slowly telling the story - so it ends up like a collection of sorts. I'm still figuring out what's best for this plot.

I actually don't know what to say to this, except I want to know more!

First I adore the layout and summary, seriously it's perfect and it really fits in. It's interesting though, thinking about it now, how the layout is green , it's a nice surprise.

The story itself was... intense, at least for me, I felt like I was on my tiptoes the whole time, trying to figure out what was going on but at the same time enjoying what was being told about the characters.

I loved the mystery you kept around this whole point, it was on key, giving the reader just enough information to keep us interested.

I full-heartedly think this is an amazing one-shot. How did you come up with a plot like this?

I would love to see a sequel or part two to this!