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Tattoo (100)

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Awww :D

December 23rd, 2014 at 03:58pm

No Tomorrow (100)

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@ CuppaJoel
oh dear! Thank you for pointing that out, I will go edit it now!

December 19th, 2014 at 10:07am

Apteryx (100)

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The only issue I have with this is a single grammatical error. "(David) fitted in with the work crowd" ought to be "(David) fit in with the work crowd". Other than that, this was a very well written, adorable piece. Good work!

December 19th, 2014 at 12:31am

fiction246 (100)

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Really sweet ending :) I loved it!!

December 12th, 2014 at 12:36pm

AllTimeLoverJess (100)

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This was lovely. Thank you so much for sharing it.

December 6th, 2014 at 05:53pm

I'd.Be.Your.Tears (100)

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Aw loved this!!

December 5th, 2014 at 11:20pm

Unexpected. (100)

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Haha I loved the ending. Whoever came up with this plot is absolutely brilliant.... HAH.
Anyway.
Marigold was precious! Silly Nicky, he probably looked better in the suit than before

December 5th, 2014 at 10:42pm