Oh so this is the one you... Ooh... Guuurl this was absolutely fricking beautiful and great and I have no clue why it took me 11 days to find and read?! Ugh but seriously I loved it
Oh so this is the one you were talking..... Ooohhh.... Guuurl this absolutely great and I have no fricking clue why it took me 11 days to find this?! Ugh but seriously I loved it
No, I don't mean it in a bad way or that it shouldn't be use. I do like that it's something new that's not used a whole lot. I think if it was a nickname in a chaptered fic it would make more sense. Just because it was a smut story that's supposed to kind a sexy or something that does get you heart beating a little faster, the word just doesn't really fit. I'm not saying its bad, I don't have a problem with it really, it's just doesn't really makes sense to the whole thing to be like, "you gonna ride my cock, Amante" or "you gonna ride my cock, lover" it kind of what i mean. And I don't mean it was random as it's legit randomly thrown in there, I mean like it just kind of a weird thing to use for smut. It makes sense by definition, but actually using it as a nickname seems weird and every time I read it I kind of just looked at like, this isn't really attractive for a smut story.
In no way did I mean it was bad. I was just saying that's my personal opinion on it. I love the story and smut, it was just weird to read Jack say Amante every other sentence.
I'm probably not making sense trying to explain it and you're probably looking at my comment like I'm legit stupid or something and should just shut up. So, I don't know. I'll go.
@ RaisedByMusicc well i mean it was used as an every day nickname, and therefore not meant to be sexy???? it was just something different that hadn't been used before. no one else seems to really think that, with them tourin the world, they're gonna pick up new words and use them. it wasn't really random either, since where amante showed up was where a baby or babe would've originally been used.
@ JamieAllOver. Ohh, I must have skipped over it when I read it. Which I weird, I don't usually do that XD I don't know, I found calling him that weird and distracting honestly because it doesn't make sense to called Alex "lover" randomly. It's not sexy at all either so I got really turned off every time I read it. I loved the story though, it was perfect besides that. Just my opinion, don't hate me please /.\
@ RaisedByMusicc “Amante, hey, I think it’s time you either finish that or let me dump it. It’s getting late; we should start heading home. I don’t need you being a little bitch tomorrow,” the elder started, using the nickname he’d picked up from their Hispanic fans. It was the one that Alex secretly adored; the one that simply meant ‘lover.’
this paragraph, the first one where amante is used, explains everything. ah-mon-teah
I'm genuinely confused. What the hell does Amante mean? I loved the smut, it was seriously amazing, but that confused me so much. I had to keep stopping and re-read the word like four times and I still can't pronounce it /.\
guess who hasn't gotten any notifications bc she hasn't updated anything in forever and ye i did skim through the first part and then it got smutty and i was like "wait slow down"
I found out that Jack liked this pic on instagram → instagram(.)com(/)p(/)1r4o1JNedX(/) then I read this fic and my mind was just blown(?) urgh, it is perfect! I love that 'Amante' nickname