@ acid_rain88 Hmmm I'm kinda trying to figure out what I'm going to do with Chris, in the next few chapters we may learn more about him. And who know joker may as well. Hmmm.
so curious as to what joker has planned.... but also just wondering how long you're planning for this one to be- since it's still your contribution(?) to the contest?
This is really awesome. I was glued to it the entire time. Tbh, i thought that I was not going to like it but I do and cant wait for more. Please update soon!
hah, chris was made to babysit a reaaaally drunk riley the joker is a weirdo though (as predicted) totally got two personalities so ya never know what he'll do next
woah woah wait! does it end there? like that?? i... but... what?? uuh... why was chris there? what does the joker want with riley?? ya know.. i'm curious.. damn
I really like how you started the first chapter. The way you set the scene of her sitting in the chair, I could envision it perfectly. She sounds like quite the bad ass with her black boots and blue hair, and how she handled herself with that Joker goon who wouldn't back off, so that's a plus, too.
I'm really intrigued by the relationship between Riley and The Joker. He must feel strongly toward her if he's keeping her around, but I'm wondering how far those feelings go; whether he's serious about her, or if she'll end up being another Harley Quinn. Riley definitely seems stronger and more independent than Harley, but that remains to be seen. That, among other things, is something I'll be interested to see explored in future chapters.
Great job with this so far! I'm looking forward to reading what else you have in store.