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  • EmzyStilinski

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    @ Katie Mosing
    Thank you so much!!!!

    That was what I was going for with the whole Fault in our Stars.

    @ Rick Grimes;
    Thanks
    December 17th, 2014 at 10:40pm
  • Katie Mosing

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    Aww, the ending was so cute where he was like "Really?" And she was like "Really." For some reason it reminded me of the fault in our stars where they do the okay thing XD

    This was really cute and I love the way you developed Louis and Bella's relationship! You had the comedy of the friendship and the adorableness of Louis confessing his feelings for her. It was a great combination!
    December 17th, 2014 at 10:34pm
  • simply amanda;

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    Really loved this.
    December 17th, 2014 at 10:12pm
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