I thought you characterized Sam, Dean and Cas very well. Dean is too stubborn to admit he needs help. As always. Sam tries to give his little tid-bit of help with the tea and lemon tip, but he gets shot down by Dean. And Cas is so caring, he goes out of his way to help because he knows Dean can't get through the cold on his own, and he knows what's good for Dean even if Dean doesn't know. Everything just fit so well together and the characters are written excellently.
I also really liked that you gave the gross, unappealing details of how Dean's illness was affecting him. I know most writers would have just thought it was icky and would not describe how Dean got snot on his pillow, then subsequently all over his face and eyes.
The ending was very cute. It was a lovely way to end a one-shot about how much it sucks to be sick, honestly.
When I used to read lots and lots of Destiel, I really loved domestic fics, so this was right up my alley and I liked it. Nice job!
I thought you characterized Sam, Dean and Cas very well. Dean is too stubborn to admit he needs help. As always. Sam tries to give his little tid-bit of help with the tea and lemon tip, but he gets shot down by Dean. And Cas is so caring, he goes out of his way to help because he knows Dean can't get through the cold on his own, and he knows what's good for Dean even if Dean doesn't know. Everything just fit so well together and the characters are written excellently.
I also really liked that you gave the gross, unappealing details of how Dean's illness was affecting him. I know most writers would have just thought it was icky and would not describe how Dean got snot on his pillow, then subsequently all over his face and eyes.
The ending was very cute. It was a lovely way to end a one-shot about how much it sucks to be sick, honestly.
When I used to read lots and lots of Destiel, I really loved domestic fics, so this was right up my alley and I liked it. Nice job!