I don't know how you do it but somehow you make markiplier more likable than he is in real life (not saying he isn't likeable but it just feels like your writing style brings out more of his appeal. xD)
I love how he tries bringing his marshmallow-y wrath upon the girlfriend, it's something you'd expect of him when he's flirting or being playful. And I, for one, can definitely relate to the marshmallow cocoa/hot chocolate! it's very delicious mkay?
Anywho you did a great job at capturing Markiplier's playfulness and the wintery feel of the season. One of the best sequels I've ever read to a story.
I don't know how you do it but somehow you make markiplier more likable than he is in real life (not saying he isn't likeable but it just feels like your writing style brings out more of his appeal. xD)
I love how he tries bringing his marshmallow-y wrath upon the girlfriend, it's something you'd expect of him when he's flirting or being playful. And I, for one, can definitely relate to the marshmallow cocoa/hot chocolate! it's very delicious mkay?
Anywho you did a great job at capturing Markiplier's playfulness and the wintery feel of the season. One of the best sequels I've ever read to a story.
Great job!