Broken Bottles and a Broken Home - Comments

@ silver_ice
yeah i felt like the ending was rushed myself x( but thank you so much! i really appreciate the input :)

I thought the ending came a little fast after all that build up, but it was otherwise really good... you have a good foundation here :)

@ xMareBear14x
thank you! im sorry for making you tear up though omg

This is so good. I thought Jack was going to die and I legit teared up. I loved it so much!

@ jvhnocallaghan
well thanks, that really means a lot. you're so nice oh my god i hope you're life is always magnificent.

@ awkward101
I did it already but I guess it kinda depends if people are online or not. I usually do that kind of thing a couple of times to get people to see.

@ jvhnocallaghan
that's too kind, are you sure?

@ awkward101
No bother! I'm gonna post a link for this on my Tumblr, maybe you'll get more readers.

@ jvhnocallaghan
thanks! and thank you as well for telling me about that, i hadn't noticed and it personally bothers me. you're so nice.

@ m2meyes
thank you aha. tissues are essential, but im glad you didn't need them.

Yay, you posted it! Perfect, loved it even more a second time around.

(I guess I do have some last minute tips for posting on Mibba -- I've noticed it puts readers off if the story doesn't have a layout other than the original, and also paragraph breaks where appropriate, I know a lot of people hate a wall of text, myself included. I know there's some dumb trick to making paragraph breaks on Mibba though but I don't know what it is because I write fics in a Notebook document rather than Word or anything. Should be easy enough to find out if you Google it though! I hope this doesn't sound bitchy, I just want you to have as many readers as possible.)

I really loved this :) You honestly scared me there for the ending, I even got the tissues ready.